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Dehua Liu's Resume
Personal Data
Name: Dehua Liu
Gender: Male
Address: Class 9802, Guanghua Management College, Peking University, Beijing 10056
Tel: (010) 6320-4562
E-mail:editor@jxue.com
Career objective
To be employed by a transnational company in Beijing as a department manager.
Education
Guanghua Management College, Peking University, 1998--2002.
Beijing Jingshan School, 1992--1998.
Major
Business Administration
Summer Jobs
1999 Made personnel system reform plans for a large state-owned enterprise in Tianjin.
2000 Participated in planning the restructuring of several medium-sized collective enterprises in the suburbs of Beijing.
2001 Acted as an assistant to the manager of a multinational company in Beijing.
Extracurricular Activities
Captain of the Peking University basketball team from 1998 to 2000.
Won the university calligraphy contest in 1999.
Chairman of the Publicity Campaign
Commission of Peking University of Supporting Beijing's application for hosting the Olympics in 2008.
Won the title of an Excellent Leader of the University Student Council in 2002.
English
CET Band Six in 2000: 93 points
TOEFL in 2001: 658 points
GRE in 2002: 2328 points
Character
Ambitious, honest and reliable, easy to approach
Hobbies
Doing on-line reading and traveling
References: Available upon request.